Altar Boy - Revision history

Astrozac at 06:39, 18 December 2016

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Infobroker at 04:36, 17 June 2016

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Astrozac at 05:45, 2 September 2015

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Astrozac at 17:35, 25 August 2015

2015-08-25T17:35:37Z

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Infobroker at 03:31, 30 October 2014

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 |status       = Inactive
 |realname     = Brian Thomas Kinney
-|debut        = {{KBAC2}} [[2:5|#5]] <br>
+|debut        =
 |AF1title    =First Appearance:
 |AF1info   =   June 1997
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 |headlines    =
 |appearances  = '''As Brian Kinney'''<br>
-{{KBAC2}} [[2:4|#4]]<bR>
+{{KBAC2}} [[{{KBAC2}} No.4|#4]]<bR>
 '''As Altar Boy''' <br>
-{{KBAC2}} [[2:5|#5]], [[2:6|6]], [[2:7|7]], [[2:8|8]], [[2:9|9]] <br>
+{{KBAC2}} [[{{KBAC2}} No.5|#5]], [[{{KBAC2}} No.6|6]], [[{{KBAC2}} No.7|7]], [[{{KBAC2}} No.8|8]], [[{{KBAC2}} No.9|9]] <br>
 }}

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 As a teenager, Brian Kinney came to [[Astro City]] to meet, hook up with, and (he quietly hoped) become a super-hero. He immediately found a job at [[Bruiser's]] bar but based on Brian's behaviour the first day of employment, the [[ K.O. Carson |owner]] recommended him to work at a more prestigious eatery, [[Butler's]]. It was only a few days there before he had the chance to prove himself in front of many non-costumed heroes.  In an attempted hostage situation, with Brian as the hostage, he took the opportunity to turn the table as it were and defeat the villain ([[Glue-Gun]]) without any assistance.
-His action garnered the attentions of rival bus-boys and more importantly the vigilante super-hero known as the [[Confessor(Jeremiah Parrish)|Confessor]] who made his interests immediately clear.
+His action garnered the attentions of his rival workers and more importantly the vigilante super-hero known as the [[Confessor(Jeremiah Parrish)|Confessor]] who made his interests immediately clear.
-Thus fortune, fate, and determined effort blessed Brian with the opportunity to train with one of Astro City's more illustrious (and perhaps infamous) superheroes.  One thing was certain, people respected the Confessor, and respect was the main thing that Brian felt was missing in his and his father's lives.
+Thus fortune, fate, and a determined effort, blessed Brian with the opportunity to train with one of Astro City's more illustrious (and perhaps infamous) superheroes.  One thing was certain, people respected the Confessor, and respect was the main thing that Brian felt was missing in his and his father's lives.
 It was a magic summer for Brian as his apprenticeship lead to fast advancement and lots of action patrolling the streets and fighting criminals. Among his highlights were helping [[Crackerjack]] prove that an imposter had been committing crimes in the very guise of Crackerjack. In addition, he aided the Confessor with the capture of various criminals that ran the gamut from the colorful, resourceful [[Gunslinger]], to simple, petty [[Byoosik's Bumblers|thieves]]. But that summer of 1997 turned tragic as first the citizens of Astro City turned on their super-empowered guardians, and then his mentor sacrificed himself to reveal the [[Enelsians|alien intruders]] threatening the safety of Astro City and the world.

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	His action garnered the attentions of rival bus-boys and more importantly the vigilante super-hero known as the [[Confessor(Jeremiah Parrish)\|Confessor]] who made his interests immediately clear.		His action garnered the attentions of rival bus-boys and more importantly the vigilante super-hero known as the [[Confessor(Jeremiah Parrish)\|Confessor]] who made his interests immediately clear.
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−	~~[[image:confessorInvitational2.jpg\|\|center]]~~

	Thus fortune, fate, and determined effort blessed Brian with the opportunity to train with one of Astro City's more illustrious (and perhaps infamous) superheroes. One thing was certain, people respected the Confessor, and respect was the main thing that Brian felt was missing in his and his father's lives.		Thus fortune, fate, and determined effort blessed Brian with the opportunity to train with one of Astro City's more illustrious (and perhaps infamous) superheroes. One thing was certain, people respected the Confessor, and respect was the main thing that Brian felt was missing in his and his father's lives.

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 {{character infobox2
 |image        = Image:AltarboyPerched.jpg
-|imagewidth   = 250px
+|imagewidth   = 320px
 |status       = Inactive
 |realname     = Brian Thomas Kinney

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 {{character infobox2
-|image        = Image:Altarboy3.jpg
+|image        = Image:AltarboyPerched.jpg
-|imagewidth   = 200px
+|imagewidth   = 250px
 |status       = Inactive
 |realname     = Brian Thomas Kinney

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 |headlines    =
-|appearances  = {{KBAC2}} [[2:4|#4]], [[2:5|5]], [[2:6|6]], [[2:7|7]], [[2:8|8]], [[2:9|9]]
+|appearances  = {{KBAC2}} [[2:5|#5]], [[2:6|6]], [[2:7|7]], [[2:8|8]], [[2:9|9]] <br>
 }}

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 {{character page
 |intro        =
-The sidekick to the [[Confessor]], Altar Boy bolted onto the scene in 1997 during the [[Enelsian Invasion]], only to disappear after the Confessor's martyred death. He has not been seen since.
+The sidekick to [[The Confessor (Jeremiah Parrish)| the Confessor]], Altar Boy bolted onto the scene in 1997 during the [[Enelsian Invasion]], only to disappear after the Confessor's martyred death. He has not been seen since.
 |history      =

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 It was a magic summer for Brian as his apprenticeship lead to fast advancement and lots of action patrolling the streets and fighting criminals. Among his highlights were helping [[Crackerjack]] prove that an imposter had been committing crimes in the very guise of Crackerjack. In addition, he aided the Confessor with the capture of various criminals that ran the gamut from the colorful, resourceful [[Gunslinger]], to simple, petty [[Byoosik's Bumblers|thieves]]. But that summer of 1997 turned tragic as first the citizens of Astro City turned on their super-empowered guardians, and then his mentor sacrificed himself to reveal the [[Enelsians|alien intruders]] threatening the safety of Astro City and the world.
-The very brief career of the Altar Boy went dormant after that tremendous loss, but Brian did not lose focus on his goals. After four years of traveling and training, he took up the mission of his mentor, continuing his crime-fighting career by becoming the new force behind the mask and mission of [[Confessor(Brian Kinney)|the Confessor]].
+The very brief career of the Altar Boy went dormant after that tremendous loss, but Brian did not lose focus on his goals. After four years of traveling and training, he took up the mission of his mentor, continuing his crime-fighting career by becoming the new force behind the mask and iconic imagery of [[Confessor(Brian Kinney)|the Confessor]].
 |powers       =

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 His action garnered the attentions of rival bus-boys and more importantly the vigilante super-hero known as the [[Confessor(Jeremiah Parrish)|Confessor]] who made his interests immediately clear.
-[[image:confessorInvitational.jpg||center]]
+[[image:confessorInvitational2.jpg||center]]
 Thus fortune, fate, and determined effort blessed Brian with the opportunity to train with one of Astro City's more illustrious (and perhaps infamous) superheroes.  One thing was certain, people respected the Confessor, and respect was the main thing that Brian felt was missing in his and his father's lives.
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 |footnotes    =
-The last name of Kinney, might, just might refer to the '''Kinney National Company[//en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Kinney_National_Company Kinney National Company]''' which owned National Periodicals Publications (later DC Comics).
+The last name of Kinney, might, just might refer to the '''Kinney National Company[//en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Kinney_National_Company]''' which owned National Periodicals Publications (later DC Comics).
 }}