Jazzbaby - Revision history

Infobroker at 16:15, 17 November 2023

2023-11-17T16:15:47Z

Infobroker at 02:25, 13 May 2017

2017-05-13T02:25:15Z

Infobroker at 02:23, 13 May 2017

2017-05-13T02:23:41Z

Infobroker: variety of images

2017-05-05T03:51:33Z

variety of images

Infobroker at 03:25, 5 May 2017

2017-05-05T03:25:41Z

Infobroker at 03:16, 5 May 2017

2017-05-05T03:16:25Z

Infobroker at 03:14, 5 May 2017

2017-05-05T03:14:49Z

Infobroker: sentence restructures, clarifications, image insertion

2017-05-05T02:50:42Z

sentence restructures, clarifications, image insertion

Infobroker: word choice for starters, this still needs work

2017-03-17T02:06:14Z

word choice for starters, this still needs work

Dornbeast at 20:30, 27 August 2016

2016-08-27T20:30:48Z

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 |footnotes    =
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 [[Category: Unknown Alliance Alignment]]

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 |speculations =
-If the [[The Broken Man]]'s tale is to be trusted, she is a later incarnation of [[Mister Cakewalk]].  This would suggest that she is also connected with [[The Bouncing Beatnik]] and [[The Halcyon Hippie]], and that the association between the four characters is somehow based on the music of the times.
+If the [[The Broken Man|Broken Man's]] tale is to be trusted, she is a later incarnation of [[Mister Cakewalk]].  This would suggest that she is also connected with [[The Bouncing Beatnik]] and [[The Halcyon Hippie]], and that the association between the four characters is somehow based on the music of the times.
 There is also a suggested hint that the destruction of [[Silverstring|Silverstring's]] guitar in the late 1800s,  was the catalyst-force behind the sub-culture personas defining this entity or entities as it travels through time.

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 {{character page
 |intro        =
- [[The Broken Man]] spins a tale of '''{{PAGENAME}}''' being mixed up in '''[[The Oubor |the Oubor Conspiracy]]''' with [[Dame Progress]] shortly after World War I.
+The Broken Man spins a tale of '''{{PAGENAME}}''' being mixed up in '''[[The Oubor |the Oubor Conspiracy]]''' shortly after World War I.

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 {{character infobox2
-|image        = Image:Jazzbaby.jpg
+|image        = Image:JazzbabyFull2.jpg
 |imagewidth   = 300
 |status       = Presumed Inactive, likely reincarnated

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 |history      =
-Jazzbaby first appeared in Romeyn Falls (now Astro City) just as jazz music took form and became a prominent part of American popular culture.  The precise date is unknown, but can reasonably be estimated as  sometime between America's entry into World War I (1917), and a known interaction with Dame Progress in 1919.
+Jazzbaby first appeared in Romeyn Falls (now Astro City) just as jazz music took form and became a prominent part of American popular culture.  The precise date of her debut is unknown, but can reasonably be estimated as  sometime between America's entry into World War I (1917), and a known interaction with Dame Progress in 1919.
 |powers       =

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 If the [[The Broken Man]]'s tale is to be trusted, she is a later incarnation of [[Mister Cakewalk]].  This would suggest that she is also connected with [[The Bouncing Beatnik]] and [[The Halcyon Hippie]], and that the association between the four characters is somehow based on the music of the times.
-There is also a suggested hint that the destruction of [[Silverstring]]'s guitar in the late 1800s,  was the catalyst-force behind the sub-culture personas defining this entity or entities as it travels through time.
+There is also a suggested hint that the destruction of [[Silverstring|Silverstring's]] guitar in the late 1800s,  was the catalyst-force behind the sub-culture personas defining this entity or entities as it travels through time.
 |timelines    =

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 |date = <today's date plus a minimum of 90 days>
 }}-->
 {{character infobox2
-|image        = Image:NIA3.gif
+|image        = Image:Jazzbaby.jpg
-|imagewidth   = 200
+|imagewidth   = 300
-|status       = Presumed Inactive, likely deceased
+|status       = Presumed Inactive, likely reincarnated
 |realname     =
 |debut        =
-|earliest     = 1919
+|earliest     = late 1910s
 |origin       =
 |affiliation  =
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 |appearances  = {{AC}} #37, 38 <Br>
 }}
 {{character page
 |intro        =
-A entity mentioned by the [[Broken Man]] as being involved in some part of [[The Oubor]] with [[Dame Progress]] in 1919.
+ [[The Broken Man]] spins a tale of '''{{PAGENAME}}''' being mixed up in '''[[The Oubor |the Oubor Conspiracy]]''' with [[Dame Progress]] shortly after World War I.
 |history      =
-'''Jazzbaby''' appeared in Astro City during the same time frame that jazz music took form and became a   prominent part of American popular music.  The precise date is unknown, but can reasonably be estimated to be sometime between 6 April 1917 and 1919 - America's entry into World War I, and a known interaction with Dame Progress.
+Jazzbaby first appeared in Romeyn Falls (now Astro City) just as jazz music took form and became a prominent part of American popular culture.  The precise date is unknown, but can reasonably be estimated as  sometime between America's entry into World War I (1917), and a known interaction with Dame Progress in 1919.
 |powers       =
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-|speculations = If the [[The Broken Man]]'s telling is to be trusted, she is a later incarnation of [[Mister Cakewalk]].  This would suggest that she is also connected with [[The Bouncing Beatnik]] and [[The Halcyon Hippie]], and that the connection between the four characters is the music of the times.  There may also be a connection to the destruction of [[Silverstring]]'s guitar.
+|speculations =
 |timelines    =
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 }}
 [[Category: Unknown Alliance Alignment]]