The Myth-Master - Revision history

Astrozac at 21:45, 4 December 2016

2016-12-04T21:45:23Z

Infobroker at 03:29, 24 May 2016

2016-05-24T03:29:58Z

Infobroker at 03:27, 24 May 2016

2016-05-24T03:27:46Z

Infobroker at 20:50, 23 May 2016

2016-05-23T20:50:31Z

Infobroker: restructuring

2016-05-23T20:49:33Z

restructuring

Infobroker: sentence reorg and such

2015-12-07T18:33:51Z

sentence reorg and such

Astrozac at 18:46, 4 July 2015

2015-07-04T18:46:27Z

Infobroker: insert image

2014-07-08T20:03:25Z

insert image

Infobroker: more clean ups

2014-07-08T19:59:20Z

more clean ups

Infobroker: fixed some of the run on sentences, passive voice and improper pronoun usage.

2014-07-08T19:45:43Z

fixed some of the run on sentences, passive voice and improper pronoun usage.

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-|appearances  = {{KBAC2}} [[2:13|#13]]
+|appearances  = {{KBAC2}} [[{{KBAC2}} No.13|#13]]
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-A mystery villain with no past makes a sudden and dramatic appearance in Astro City in the year 1964.
+It's 1964, and this mystery villain with no past makes a sudden and dramatic appearance in Astro City.
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−	His ~~major goal~~ was the destruction of Astro City's most revered super-hero team, [[Honor Guard]]. Details of how he nearly accomplished that goal are immortalized as [[the Myth-Master Incident]].	+	His singular mission was the destruction of Astro City's most revered super-hero team, [[Honor Guard]]. Details of how he nearly accomplished that goal are immortalized as [[the Myth-Master Incident]].

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-Leo wields a belief focus, a power that soaks up psychic energy and then manipulates it in any and all manners imaginable.
+The Myth-Master wields a power that soaks up psychic energy and then manipulates it in any and all manners imaginable.
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 |intro        =
-==The Myth-Master Incident==
+A mystery villain with no past makes a sudden and dramatic appearance in Astro City in the year 1964.
 |history      =
 |powers       =
 |equipment    =
-Leo wields a belief focus, a power that could soak up psychic energy and then manipulate it in any manner he chooses to imagine.
+Leo wields a belief focus, a power that soaks up psychic energy and then manipulates it in any and all manners imaginable.
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 In the year 1964, during a low point in his dreary life, [[Loony Leo]] came under the influences and evil guidance of the villain, ZZardo.
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-==The Myth-Master Incident==
-After being "rescued" by Zzardo and promised a chance to die, Loony Leo became the Myth-Master and agreed to destroy Honor Guard. He conjured up figures from folklore and fiction to battle with the super-team. <br>
+After being "rescued" by Zzardo and promised a chance to die, Loony Leo became [[the Myth-Master]] and agreed to destroy Honor Guard. He conjured up figures from folklore and fiction to battle with the super-team.
 *[http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Achilles Achilles]- The legendary Greek Warrior
 *[http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Blackbeard Blackbeard]- The notorious pirate
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 *[http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Hansel_and_Gretel The Witch]- The witch from "Hansel and Gretel"
-Even with the legendary Joe Magarac apparently switching sides, Honor Guard, with all of their powers and abilities , couldn't  overtake the beings of fantasy, myth and imagination.  The Myth-Master captured them and used his innate powers to drain their psychic energies.  But just as they were on the verge of fading from existence, he relented. He just couldn't kill them, or anyone for that matter. Loony Leo revealed his true identity and captured his henchman, Zzardo.  The Silver Agent and the others were sympathetic to Leo's plight, and even though a trial was scheduled, steps were taken to keep everything low key and hushed up. The general public never knew the identity of the entity behind the mask of the Myth-Master.
+Even with '''Joe Magarac''' apparently switching sides, Honor Guard, with all of their powers and abilities couldn't overpower this collections of characters from fantasy, myth, and imagination.  The Myth-Master captured them and used his innate powers to drain their psychic energies.  But just as they were on the verge of fading from existence, he relented. He just couldn't kill them, or anyone for that matter. Loony Leo revealed his true identity and captured his henchman, Zzardo.  [[The Silver Agent]] and the other heroes were sympathetic to Leo's plight, and even though a trial was scheduled, steps were taken to keep everything low key and "out of the papers." The identity of the Myth-Master was never revealed to the general public.
 |powers       =
 |equipment    =
-Leo wielded a belief focus, a power that could soak up psychic energy, which could then be manipulated in any manner he choose to imagine.
+Leo wields a belief focus, a power that could soak up psychic energy and then manipulate it in any manner he chooses to imagine.
 |observations =
 |speculations =
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 {{DEFAULTSORT: Myth-Master}}
 [[Category: Villains]]

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-|image        = Image:Sample320.gif
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 |status       = Inactive
 |realname     = [[Loony Leo]]