The Pale Horseman - Revision history

Astrozac at 07:31, 20 December 2016

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Astrozac at 07:30, 20 December 2016

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Astrozac at 06:01, 26 May 2016

2016-05-26T06:01:16Z

Astrozac: Trying to clean up

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Trying to clean up

Astrozac at 06:25, 15 May 2016

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Astrozac at 08:04, 2 November 2015

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Infobroker at 05:51, 26 October 2015

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Infobroker at 05:26, 26 October 2015

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Astrozac at 04:49, 26 October 2015

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Astrozac at 07:34, 25 October 2015

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 |appearances  = {{DA4}} [[{{DA4}} No.2|#2]], [[{{DA4}} No.3|3]], [[{{DA4}} No.4|4]] <Br>
-{{SA}} [[{{SA}} 2|#2]] <Br>
+{{SA}} [[{{SA}} No.2|#2]] <Br>
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 |status       = Not in this realm; possibly destroyed
 |realname     =
-|debut        = {{DA4}} #2; first mentioned in {{KBAC2}} #8
+|debut        =
 |earliest     = 1984
 |origin       =
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 |headlines    =
-|appearances  = {{DA4}} [[DA4:2|#2]], [[DA4:3|3]], [[DA4:4|4]] <Br>
+|appearances  = {{DA4}} [[{{DA4}} No.2|#2]], [[{{DA4}} No.3|3]], [[{{DA4}} No.4|4]] <Br>
-{{SA}} [[CS:SA 2|#2]] <Br>
+{{SA}} [[{{SA}} 2|#2]] <Br>
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 |history =
-{{Grammar Corrections}}
 The Pale Horseman burst onto the scene in late July of 1984. During his brief time in this world, no one in Astro City, neither criminal nor law-abiding citizen felt safe. He claimed several villains early on in his reign of fear, including [[Hollowpoint]] as victims, leaving only their charred remains. [[Otter]], [[Mister Toad]] and [[Owl]] were about to meet the same fate one evening before the [[Street Angel]] intervened leading the Horseman away. The Street Angel had previously escaped him, but on this night he would meet his fate like so many of the other criminals, though he saved the villainous trio's lives in the process.
-The Pale Horseman also felt something or someone tapping into his power. The [[Silver Agent]] revealed the rip in reality opened by the [[Point Man]] during the [[Rise of Kerresh the Devastator]] in which the Point Man fired [[The Innocent Gun]] was the source of The Pale Horseman's power and entrance into this realm.
+The Pale Horseman soon felt something or someone tapping into his power. The [[Silver Agent]] revealed the rip in reality opened by the [[Point Man]] during the [[Rise of Kerresh the Devastator]] in which the Point Man fired [[The Innocent Gun]] was the source of The Pale Horseman's power and entrance into this realm.
 [[Lord Sovereign]] was the one attempting to raid that power source which caused thee two beings to come into contact and conflict with one another. As they fought one another it appeared both were slightly weakened. The pair were trying to get away, but the Silver Agent managed to shut down the machines that powered Lord Sovereign and closed the rift in reality, blinking both beings out of this world. See also the [[Final Crisis Point]].

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 |history =
 {{Grammar Corrections}}
-The Pale Horseman burst onto the scene in late July of 1984. During his brief time on this world, no one in Astro City, neither criminal nor law-abiding citizen felt safe. He already claimed several villains, including [[Hollowpoint]] as victims, leaving only their charred remains. He was about to do the same [[Otter]], [[Mister Toad]] and [[Owl]] one evening before [[Street Angel]] intervened leading the Horseman away. The Street Angel had previously escaped him, but on this night he would meet his fate like so many of the other criminals, though he saved the villainous trio's lives in the process.
+The Pale Horseman burst onto the scene in late July of 1984. During his brief time in this world, no one in Astro City, neither criminal nor law-abiding citizen felt safe. He claimed several villains early on in his reign of fear, including [[Hollowpoint]] as victims, leaving only their charred remains. [[Otter]], [[Mister Toad]] and [[Owl]] were about to meet the same fate one evening before the [[Street Angel]] intervened leading the Horseman away. The Street Angel had previously escaped him, but on this night he would meet his fate like so many of the other criminals, though he saved the villainous trio's lives in the process.
-The Pale Horseman also felt something tapping into his power, which the [[Silver Agent]] revealed was the rip in reality opened by the [[Point Man]] during the Rise of [[Kerresh the Devastator]] when he fired [[The Innocent Gun]]. [[Lord Sovereign]] was the one attempting to raid that power source which caused thee two beings came into contact with one another. As they both fought it appeared both were slightly weakened and trying to get away, but the Agent managed to shut down the machines that powered Lord Sovereign and closed the rift, blinking both beings out of this world. See also the [[Final Crisis Point]].
+The Pale Horseman also felt something or someone tapping into his power. The [[Silver Agent]] revealed the rip in reality opened by the [[Point Man]] during the [[Rise of Kerresh the Devastator]] in which the Point Man fired [[The Innocent Gun]] was the source of The Pale Horseman's power and entrance into this realm.
 |powers =

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 |headlines    =
-|appearances  = {{DA4}} [[DA4:2|#2]], [[DA4:3|3]], [[DA4:4|#4]] <Br>
+|appearances  = {{DA4}} [[DA4:2|#2]], [[DA4:3|3]], [[DA4:4|4]] <Br>
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 {{Character page
 |intro =
-Draped in his tattered cloak, astride his skeletal horse, the horrific Pale Horseman rode on fire. A ghostly hunter of those individuals who violated his sensibilities of society's laws and rules. This could be anyone, committing any crime. The scope of his vengeful wrath ran the gamut from hardened killers to thoughtless jaywalkers. All types of violators numbered among his victims. He would approach his prey, his skinless steed galloping upon the very air, and with supernatural abilities, wither him, her or them, to a shriveled, bony mass.
+Draped in his tattered cloak, the horrific '''Pale Horseman''' rode on a skeletal stead of flames. He was a ghostly hunter, incinerating those who violated his sensibilities of society's laws and rules. This could be anyone, committing any crime. The scope of his vengeful wrath ran the gamut from hardened killers to thoughtless jaywalkers. All types of violators numbered among his victims. He would approach his prey, his skinless steed galloping upon the very air, and with supernatural abilities, he cast fire and brimstone upon them, shriveling their bony mass into a pile of dusty ash.
 |history =
 {{Grammar Corrections}}
-The Pale Horseman burst onto the scene in 1984 from the gathering darkness and no law-breaker was safe from the top super villains to the petty child thieves. He incinerated them all. He was about to do so to [[Otter]], [[Mister Toad]] and [[Owl]] one evening before [[Street Angel]] intervened leading the Horseman away. The Street Angel had previously escaped him, but on this night he would meet his fate like all of the criminals.
+The Pale Horseman burst onto the scene in 1984. During his time on this world, no one in Astro City, neither criminal nor law-abiding citizen felt safe. He was about to do so to [[Otter]], [[Mister Toad]] and [[Owl]] one evening before [[Street Angel]] intervened leading the Horseman away. The Street Angel had previously escaped him, but on this night he would meet his fate like all of the criminals.
 But at the same time, the Pale Horseman felt something tapping into his power, which the [[Silver Agent]] revealed was the rip in reality opened by the [[Point Man]] during the Rise of [[Kerresh the Devastator]]. [[Lord Sovereign]] was the one attempting to raid that power source. The two beings came into contact and fought. It appeared both were slightly weakened and trying to go, but the Agent managed to shut machines that powered Sovereign down and closed the rift, blinking both beings out of this world. See also the [[Final Crisis Point]].

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	The Pale Horseman burst onto the scene in 1984 from the gathering darkness and no law-breaker was safe from the top super villains to the petty child thieves. He incinerated them all. He was about to do so to [[Otter]], [[Mister Toad]] and [[Owl]] one evening before [[Street Angel]] intervened leading the Horseman away. The Street Angel had previously escaped him, but on this night he would meet his fate like all of the criminals.		The Pale Horseman burst onto the scene in 1984 from the gathering darkness and no law-breaker was safe from the top super villains to the petty child thieves. He incinerated them all. He was about to do so to [[Otter]], [[Mister Toad]] and [[Owl]] one evening before [[Street Angel]] intervened leading the Horseman away. The Street Angel had previously escaped him, but on this night he would meet his fate like all of the criminals.